1986. Some works of literature use
the element of time in a distinct way. The chronological sequence of events may
be altered, or time may be suspended or accelerated. Choose a novel, an epic,
or a play of recognized literary merit and show how the author's manipulation
of time contributes to the effectiveness of the work as a whole. Do not merely
summarize the plot.
In Audrey Niffenegger's
book, The Time Travelers Wife, the author uses time travel
to enhance her story. The way she uses time is quite interesting actually,
because she creates a character who has a genetic disorder that causes him to
time travel unpredictably.
The love story between Henry, the time
traveler, and his wife Clare is a sad but amazing one. Niffenegger uses the
time travel to have their love grow over time because once they meet naturally;
Henry then begins to time travel back to Clare's childhood. This means that
Clare has known Henry her whole life and she has been falling in love with
Henry since she was six years old. This strong connection between the
love Clare has for him as she grows up and he is there for her then, and how
she loves him when they are older proves how important the time travel was to
their relationship.
Henry and Clare’s story
complicates when they are unable to conceive children due to the genetic
disorder that Henry is passing onto the child. This is obviously very sad for
the both of them because they want children but Henry does not want Clare to go
through that pain of having miscarriages anymore and gets a vasectomy. This
would have worked if a version Henry who had not yet had a vasectomy had not
traveled to visit Clare and had gotten her pregnant. Henry is upset at first,
but when the child is born is ultimately happy for the occurrence.
Henry then travels and meets his
ten-year-old daughter before she is technically born; he learns from his future
daughter that she is able to somewhat control where she travels in time. He
also learns some sad news. His daughter, Aba, informs him that he died when she
was five years old. This give Henry the knowledge of his untimely death at the
age of 43 and means he only has five years left to live. The way the author
uses time travel to predict Henry’s death and how he dies is very clever and
allows for a lot of emotional reaction from the reader because he knows, and we
know that he is going to die and that he has zero control over it.
Niffenegger uses time
effectively to show the connection and love between Henry and Clare. She also
uses it to strengthen the story and the hardship of Henry’s disease, which
contributes to the work as a whole.
I think Ms. Holmes really wants us to read each others blogs... I think this is the third time we have been in the same group! :D
ReplyDeleteAnyways:
1. I love this book
2. You have some really good evidence, but your main theme is weak. It's sort of just stating, "yes, there is a manipulation of time in this story," rather then "the manipulation of time in this story gives the effects of blah blah and the author uses techniques X Y Z and enhance this passage of time." In other words, you might just want to really narrow down your theme!
3. You might want to just work on the concision of your writing and using some more professional diction (not so many "really," "actually," etc"), and you seem to try and spell things out by saying "this or that means blah blah," but you have really good evidence, so you don't really need to use that sentence opener.
But all in all, I think this essay was pretty good.
Erin Donahue
The first thing I noticed was that The Time Traveler's Wife is not a novel of recognized literary merit. I know sometimes our favorite books fit the prompt so well, but try to pick something you have, or logically would, read in a lit class. I also agree with Erin's number two. Most of your essay was telling us the various times Henry travels through time, instead of what purpose those serve and the techniques the author used to that. Overall though, your essay was interesting and pretty good.
ReplyDeleteHi Marie,
ReplyDeleteI agree with both Erin and Brianna in that your thesis could be a bit stronger. You did a great job of explaining how time travel played a huge role in this story, but I suggest talking about how the author used different aspects of DILDS to show the time travel and how that impacted each of the characters. I think there was a bit more summary and less analyzing in this post, but once the thesis gets cleared up, your post will be right on track for the AP Exam. Nice work!